Tuesday, February 8, 2011
RA Thesis
"Children, Violence, and the Media: A Report for Parents and Policy Makers" creates a compelling argument to convince the adults and parents to make efforts to shield the next young generation from violence by using factual studies from credible sources, loaded terms with repetition, and rhetorical questions to create a desire among the "adult generation" to cut off the violence portrayed in the media from poisoning the minds of young people today.
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I love the specificity of this thesis. I might use a word other than "adults" since "parents" are also "adults" and in that way "adults and parents" is redundant. Also, do you mean "loaded terms with repetition" or "repetitive loaded terms"? They can mean different things. Otherwise, this looks very promising.
ReplyDeleteYoung people today, and not the young people of the future? (If it's obvious that it's young people of today, you can leave it out - less cliche. Or, if it is a matter of question, then leaving it in would be more clear, which is good. It's your call since I don't know the context very well.)
ReplyDeleteyeah, I noticed the redundancy a little after I posted it, so I'll remedy that. And I meant loaded terms as well as repetition; I'll make sure to clarify. And thanks! I see where you're coming from and I think I'll omit the "today".
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