"Alcohol Advertising: Are Our Kids Collateral or Intended Targets" is an effective argument to convince parents to protect the American youth from alcohol advertising because it uses real-life examples, polls and statistics, and calls out specific advertisers to create awareness about the threat to their children.
Can you call "calls out specific advertisers" something else so that your thesis is parallel?
ReplyDeleteThis is a great thesis! Mine definitely needs a lot more improving compared to yours. I like how you used "real-life examples" because it gives it a more personal feel.
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