Tuesday, February 8, 2011

RA Thesis

"Alcohol Advertising: Are Our Kids Collateral or Intended Targets" is an effective argument to convince parents to protect the American youth from alcohol advertising because it uses real-life examples, polls and statistics, and calls out specific advertisers to create awareness about the threat to their children.
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  1. A.RoFebruary 9, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    Can you call "calls out specific advertisers" something else so that your thesis is parallel?

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  2. Kenna DiGiFebruary 9, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    This is a great thesis! Mine definitely needs a lot more improving compared to yours. I like how you used "real-life examples" because it gives it a more personal feel.

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